2014년 10월 26일 일요일

Week 11 : Self Evaluation

Week 11 Objectives - Self Evaluation


First, what score do you think you deserve? Write a brief justification.
-  I think I deserve 1 points. I included all of the 5 classical argument elements but I need more research to make my argument strong.


Next, let's decide what did you do well, and what could you do better?

1) Narration, I tried to put necessary information that help people understand my essay.  


2)   I have to make paragraphs connected to each other. Since I wrote it separately, it looks little bit messy and there are some parts that repeat previous information. Also, I could make my confirmation better by doing more research.
 
Please recall the 5 parts of the classical argument. Which part of the classical argument did you use the best? Which part could be improved?
1) Narration. I put information that can help people understand my essay better.

2) Refutation. I think I need more research to find information that can support my refutation strongly.  

Last, what's your strategy for your next draft? Where will you focus your attention to make the second draft stronger?

- First of all, I have to do more research and find information that is powerful and reliable. With that information, I will make my confirmation and refutation stronger. After that, I will elaborate my paragraphs to connect each other and make it organically.
 
 

Research 6 Lies, detected by scientific investigation

This is also what I've done before writing my first draft but didn't write in my blog


 
 
 스탄 B. 월터스는 거짓말 탐지법에 관한 서적을 출판하고 법 집행관들에게 심문 기술 향상법을 가르치는 심문 전문가입니다. 그는 상대를 잘 관찰하는 것으로부터 우리의 거짓말 탐지 능력도 좋아질 수 있다고 말합니다. 긴장감은 눈에 보이지 않는 감정의 변화를 일으키고 행동 변화로 나타나게 되는데, 이를 이해하면 거짓말 탐지도 가능하다는 것입니다. 스탄은 이런 말과 행동에 나타나는 변화를 기만 신호라고 부릅니다. 기만과 연관성이 가장 높은 신호들은 부정을 뜻하는 얼굴 주변의 움직임으로 나타납니다. 눈·코· 입·귀 등을 만지거나 강하게 이의를 제기하며 오랫동안 머리를 흔들기도 하고, 몸을 돌려 앉으며 싫은 기색을 나타내기도 합니다. 긴장감은 말투에도 영향을 미칠 수 있는데 이런 언어적 신호는 기만의 징후입니다. 인지적 부조화도 여기에 포함되며 극도의 정신적 긴장감 속에 엉뚱한 말을 하기도 합니다. 보다 큰 범주로 '부정'이라는 신호도 있습니다. 반복적이고 한정적 진술로 대답을 회피하는 것입니다.
용의자의 몸짓·말투·감정에서 기만 신호를 포착하면 진실을 밝히는 데 도움이 됩니다. 심문 전문가 스탄은 철저한 계획에 따라 3단계로 심문해야 한다고 가르칩니다. 목표는 가능한 많은 정보를 얻어내는 것이며 동시에 그 내용도 정확해야 합니다. 1단계에서는 친밀감을 형성합니다. 2단계에서는 이야기를 이끌어 냅니다. 3단계에서는 이의를 제기합니다. 이 마지막 단계에서 형사들은 거짓말로 여겨지는 용의자의 진술 내용에 대해 집중적으로 이의를 제기하고 진술 내용과 모순되는 증거를 찾습니다. 취조실에서는 용의자만 거짓말을 하는 것은 아닙니다. 때때로 용의자를 압박하기 위해 심문관이 거짓말을 하기도 합니다.
- Some of the interrogation experts read behaviour changes to detect lie by observing movement around face suc as shaking head, touching their noses, eyes, lips, and ears. Also, they observe verbal signs like way of speaking and shaking voice.
 
최초의 거짓말 탐지 기술은 1917년 발명된 거짓말 탐지기로, 거짓말을 할 때의 긴장감으로 유발된 생리적 변화를 측정합니다. 거짓말 탐지기의 정확도는 50%~90%까지 차이가 나기 때문에 그 결과가 법정 증거로 인정되는 일은 거의 없습니다. 그러나 최근에는 정확한 거짓말 탐지 기술이 활발하게 연구되고 있습니다. 미국 국방성 연구소에서는 몇몇 최첨단 기술이 개발되고 있는데 가상의 심문관을 만들고 성별, 얼굴의 변화가 거짓말 탐지 실험에 어떤 영향을 주는지 연구합니다.피실험자가질문을 받는 동안 적외선 카메라로 얼굴의 미세한 체온 변화를 기록합니다. 거짓말을 할 때 0.1℃ 정도의 미세한 변화가 아주 짧은 순간 동안 발생하고 순식간에 정상으로 돌아옵니다. 컴퓨터는 육안으로는 볼 수 없는 미세한 체온 변화를 감지하고 정확하게 거짓말 판정을 내립니다. 이외에도 눈의 움직임을 집중적으로 추적하는 기술이 있습니다. 하지만 완전히 신뢰할 수 있는 거짓말 탐지 기술은 아직 없습니다. 
- There are many other ways to detect lie. Infrared light camera is used to observe minute temperature changes of the criminals face. Also, there is a technique that chase eye movement intensively.
 

Research 5 : types of brain imaging techniques

This is the research that I've done before writing my essay but I didn't write in my blog.

 

fMRI

Functional magnetic resonance imaging, or fMRI, is a technique for measuring brain activity. It works by detecting the changes in blood oxygenation and flow that occur in response to neural activity – when a brain area is more active it consumes more oxygen and to meet this increased demand blood flow increases to the active area. fMRI can be used to produce activation maps showing which parts of the brain are involved in a particular mental process.

CT

Computed tomography (CT) scanning builds up a picture of the brain based on the differential absorption of X-rays. During a CT scan the subject lies on a table that slides in and out of a hollow, cylindrical apparatus. An x-ray source rides on a ring around the inside of the tube, with its beam aimed at the subjects head. After passing through the head, the beam is sampled by one of the many detectors that line the machine’s circumference. Images made using x-rays depend on the absorption of the beam by the tissue it passes through. Bone and hard tissue absorb x-rays well, air and water absorb very little and soft tissue is somewhere in between. Thus, CT scans reveal the gross features of the brain but do not resolve its structure well.

PET

Positron Emission Tomography (PET) uses trace amounts of short-lived radioactive material to map functional processes in the brain. When the material undergoes radioactive decay a positron is emitted, which can be picked up be the detector. Areas of high radioactivity are associated with brain activity.

EEG

Electroencephalography (EEG) is the measurement of the electrical activity of the brain by recording from electrodes placed on the scalp. The resulting traces are known as an electroencephalogram (EEG) and represent an electrical signal from a large number of neurons.
EEGs are frequently used in experimentation because the process is non-invasive to the research subject. The EEG is capable of detecting changes in electrical activity in the brain on a millisecond-level. It is one of the few techniques available that has such high temporal resolution.

MEG

Magnetoencephalography (MEG) is an imaging technique used to measure the magnetic fields produced by electrical activity in the brain via extremely sensitive devices known as SQUIDs. These measurements are commonly used in both research and clinical settings. There are many uses for the MEG, including assisting surgeons in localizing a pathology, assisting researchers in determining the function of various parts of the brain, neurofeedback, and others.

NIRS

Near infrared spectroscopy is an optical technique for measuring blood oxygenation in the brain. It works by shining light in the near infrared part of the spectrum (700-900nm) through the skull and detecting how much the remerging light is attenuated. How much the light is attenuated depends on blood oxygenation and thus NIRS can provide an indirect measure of brain activity.

My First Draft

My First Draft 



  Reading human mind is a frequent material that is used in SF movies such as X-man series. Besides, magicians can read or pretend to read human mind by using various magic tricks. However, is reading human mind an impossible thing in real life that can only happen in the movie? Lots of scientists have studied for a long time to make reading human mind possible. As a result, various methods like brain scanning and a lie detector have been suggested for reading human mind. If these methods are used in crime related area, people can know whether the criminal is lying or not when he or she is making statement. Also, it is expected to be possibe to know the possiblity of second conviction of criminals after their release. However, the effectiveness of these methods, especially brain scanning, is still a matter of debate. Accordingly, there is a variety of opinion about whether these methods can be used in professional areas. Brain scanning is an effective way to pick our criminals.

  Like we can see throught crime dramas such as CSI, various techniques are used in interrogation to detect criminal's lie. We have to measure the physical change of criminal which is caused by tension which occur when people lie. Now, there are some people who are well-trained to observe the signs that occur when people lie such as sweating and anxious eye movement. However, there are some limitations in this method so various methods that use machines to detect lie are invented. First, there is a lie detecting technique that measure the change of heart rate.  Usually, when people hide something or get in a trouble, their heart rate goes up. By using the machine, detectives can observe the change of heart rate and get information about whether the criminal is lying or not. Also, there is another method that record the change of blood pressure, breathe and heart rate. Leonarde Keelr made his own lie detector by adding skin conduction reaction through sweat. Keeler also made standardized software for lie detecting, means to ask criminals for effective lie detecing.Thanks to his active marketing, his lie detector spread rapidly. A lawyer, John Reid invented a new way to use lie detector. His innovation was inventing and using controlled question. Controlled question has not much relationship with something that detectives really want to know but brings emotional disturbance. According to the controlled question test, if the reaction of related question is higher than the reaction of unrelated question, the criminal is lying. A psychologist, David Lykken developed guilty knowledge test. By asking questions that are related to crime but that seem only criminals know, and measuring the reaction of criminals, people test whether the criminals' reaction increase rapidly when they answer to the crime related questions.

  Like this, brain scanning is one of the techniques to detect lie. There are various types of brain scanning like EEG, measurement of the electrical activity of the brain by recording from electrodes placed on the scalp, MEG, imaging technique used to measure the magnetic fields produced by electrical activity in the brain via extremely sensitive devices known as SQUIDs and fMRI, a technique for measuring brain activity. Among those brain scanning techniques, fMRI is considered as an effective lie detector.

  When we carry out cognitive force like feeling some kind of fear, love, and astonishment our brain get active and fMRI technique meausre the brain part that is active. Most of fMRI techniques use BOLD(blood oxygenation level dependant) way, which measure the quantity of oxygen in the brain's blood vessels to find which part of our brain is revitalized. Unlike other parts, the synapse of revitalized part of brain get active and the blood rush to that part. The rushed blood brings the difference of blood oxygenation level. The fMRI technique visualize the difference of blood oxidation level. Since specific parts of the brain get active when we lie, we can use fMRI technique to observe whether criminals are lying or not. Unlike other brain scanning techniques, fMRI technique doesn't have to inject radioactive matter into the brain. Also, people can even observe fast and specific reaction changes that  occure in 1~ 2 seconds.


  If the efficiency of brain scanning(fMRI) is proved, it will be able to detect whether the criminal is lying or not. The result of fMRI can be used as powerful evidence about criminal's lie if they state falsely during statement. Also, according to some studies, brain scans can be used not only for lie detecting but also finding some people who have high possibility to reoffend. So, we can find latent reoffenders before they really reoffend and prevent reoffending and occurence of another crime. We can find another way to treat that criminals and it will lead to the decrease of crime rate.
 
  Since the efficiency of fMRI can be proved scientifically and scientific evidences are the most reliable evidences, my arguments are mostly based on scientific studies. I will suggest appropriate study results and expert opinions to support my argument. 

   First, fMRI is an effective way to pick out criminals because it can find some people who have high possibility to reoffend according to Kent Kiehl, a neuroscientist at the non-profit Mind Research Netwok in Albuquerque, New Mexico, and his collaborators. they studied 96 male prisoners before they release. They scanned the criminals' brain by fMRI technique while the criminals solve tasks that demand quick decisions and inhibit impulsive reactions.The inmates were instructed to press a button whenever they saw the letter X but not to press a button when they saw the letter K. In this study, Kent Kiehl and his collaboraters focused on the activity of specific brain part named the anterior cingulate cortex(ACC). It is a small section in the front of the brain which perform motor control and excutive funtioning. According to the study result, men who had lower activity of ACC while solving tasks that demand quick dcisions and inihibit impulsive reactions were more likely to reoffend. Inmates with low ACC were twice as likey as inmates with high ACC to be rearrested for a offense withig 4 years of their release. Scientists even considered some factors like age, drug and alcohol abuse and psychopathic traits but the result was same.

  The fMRI technique can predict not only people who have possibility to reoffend but also people who lie. When people lie, specific parts of the brain get active and the blood rush to that part rapidly. By using fMRI technique, we can visualize the blood oxygeneation level and catch rapid changes that happen in 1~2 seconds. So, we can observe whether the criminals are lying or not. In 2001, a English doctor, Sean Spence studied to find brain part that gets active when people lie. He used recent episodic memory to investigate activated brain part and found that brain part is ventrolateral prefrontal cortices(VLPFC), which is in charge of inhibitory control. Spense said this brain part is activated when people lie because people try to suppress saying the truth. After Spense's study, many other studies about lie have been performed. Many studies had same results with Spense's and scientists found that the reaction speed get slower when people lie because lying is a specific task performance that suppress truth and slower and more difficult than saying the truth.

  Lastly, the difference between ordinary people's brains and criminals' brains can be distinguished by using brain scans. Scientists studied 21 people who have antisocial personality disorder, which many convicted criminals have. When scientists compared the brain scans of antisocial people with the brain scans of ordinary people, they could found that antisocial people's brains showed 18 percent reduction in the volume of the brain's mdidle frontal gyrus, and a 9 percent reduction in the volume of the orbital frontal gyrus. Also, according to the September 2009 Archivese of General Psychiatry, another scientific study compared psychopaths and non-psychopaths. The researchers could observe deformations in psychopaths' brain part called the amygdala. Also, the psychopaths showed a thinning of the outer layer of cortex and volume reduction of that brain part. According to researcher team member Adrain Raine, that brain part(Amygdala) is in charge of emotion. Since psychopaths have deformation of that part, they lack emotion such as empathy, remorse, and guilt. Like this, we can observe many helpful clues to pick out criminals.

  There must be some people who will disagree about my argument because of the price of fMRI machine and some study examples. However, those reasons are incomplete and have many points that can be contradicted.

  First of all, the opponents usually took the priceof fMRI machine as its weak point. According to them, an fMRI machine named New 1.5 Tesla Scanner often costs between $1,000,000  USD and $1,500,000 USD. Another fMRI machine named New 3.0 Tesla Scanner costs between $2,000,000 USD and $2,300,000 USD. It is true that the fMRI machines are expensive because $2,300,000 USD is more than 42times of Americans' average income. However, most of medical devices are expensive and when you consider the effectiveness and good points of fMRI, you can understand why it is not expensive. Compared to other brain scanning techniques, the fMRI machine has the most clear picture of  the brain. Also, it can obseve whole brain part and the change of brain activity.  Moreover, since people's interest in fMRI technique is very high, people try hard to develop the fMRI technique and accordingly, the fMRI technique is keep improving. So, the fMRI machine price will go down.

  Another reason that the opponents took is the exceptions. They argue that the fMRI machine sometimes can't distinguish people who are lying. For example, psychologists in the University of Cambridge published new study about brain scanning and during the study, they could find that some people can intentionally and voluntarily suppress their memories about crime. In their study, there were people who could manage to reduce their brain's cognition response and appear innocent but there were also some people who couldn't. Dr, Michael Anderson,  of the Medical Research Council Cognition and Brain Sciences Unit in Cambridge, said  “Clearly, more research is needed to identify why some people were much more effective than others.” According to him, we can know that this stu is incomplete and still leaves much to be desired because there are many exceptions. So, it is unreasonable for the opponents to took it as their reason to disagree about my argument.

People have seen lie detecting machine through crime dramas or movies. However, there are not many people who were curious about the ways to detect lie or the most efficient way to detect lie. However, this curiousity can have enormous effect to the crime prevention and solving. If the brain scanning technique achieve recognition about its efficiency and is allowed to use in crime related area, as I argued, it will be able to pick out inmates who have high possibility to reoffend and prevent another crime, leading to the decrease of crime rate. The brain scans will be used as powerful evidence about whether the criminal is lying or not and have an effect on the result of trial. Moreover, by finding differences between criminals' and people's brain, it wil be able find treatments for serious criminals like psychopaths. These changes will make our society safer by affecting to the crime prevention and criminal treatment.  

  You may have heard about cases of criminals who got sentence reduction by confessing falsely as if they have psychological problems or get drunk. How the victims and their family would feel about it? And, how fearful it would be to think about meeting the criminals again when they get out? Even though it is not direct, unlike existing lie detecting techniques, brain scans can play a role in solving this problem by giving appropriate sentence by figuring out lying and preventing second conviction of the inmates. So, brain scans is an effective way to pick out criminals and should be used soon.

2014년 10월 25일 토요일

Week 10 : Conclusion

Week 10 Objectives - Conclusion
Conclusion Example

Instructions:
  1. Read the conclusion instructions here.
  2. Write your conclusion and all the drafts like this example. 
  3. Don’t delete the old conclusions! Keep a record of them so I and your peers can see your progress.
My Conclusion 1

   By using fMRI technique, it is able to pick out inmates who have high possibility to recommit a crime. Also, it can pick out not only inmates who have possibility to reoffend but also people who lie. The brain scans can observe the change of brain activity and specific brain part named ventrolateral prefrontal cortices get active when people lie. So, it is able to pick out liar by using brain scans. Moreover, there are diffrences between ordinary people's brain and serial criminals' brain like deformation of amygdala. Through brain scans we can observe these differences and pick out serial criminals. If the efficiency of brain scans achieve recognition. It will be easier to pick out criminals who are lying and this will make criminals hard to run away from whay they have done. Also, it can be used as powerful evidence in trial and affect to the result of trial. Moreover, by picking out inmates who have high possibility to reoffend, we can prevent another crime and accordingly, the crime rate will decrease. For these reasons, I think the brain scanning(fMRI) is an effective way to pick out criminals.

My Conclusion 2

  People have seen lie detecting machine through crime dramas or movies. However, there are not many people who were curious about the ways to detect lie or the most efficient way to detect lie. However, this curiousity can have enormous effect to the crime prevention and solving. If the brain scanning technique achieve recognition about its efficiency and is allowed to use in crime related area, as I argued, it will be able to pick out inmates who have high possibility to reoffend and prevent another crime, leading to the decrease of crime rate. The brain scans will be used as powerful evidence about whether the criminal is lying or not and have an effect on the result of trial. Moreover, by finding differences between criminals' and people's brain, it wil be able find treatments for serious criminals like psychopaths. These changes will make our society safer by affectin to the crime prevention and criminal treatment.
  You may have heard about cases of criminals who got sentence reduction by confessing falsely as if they have psychological problems or get drunk. How the victims and their family would feel about it? And, how fearful it would be to think about meeting the criminals again when they get out? Even though it is not direct, unlike existing lie detecting techniques, brain scans can play a role in solving this problem by giving appropriate sentence by figuring out lying and preventing second conviction of the inmates. So, brain scans is an effective way to pick out criminals and should be used soon.
 

Week 9 : Refutation and Concession

Week 9 Objectives - Refutation and Concession
 
 
Refutation and Concession Example
 
1. What is my thesi?
Brain scanning(fMRI) is an effective way to pick out criminals.
 
2. What is the opposite position?
Brain scanning is incomplete to be used to pick out criminals.
 
3. What arguments can I anticipate?
Using brain scanning for detecting lie is too expensive(The major cost of an fMRI experiment is the MR scanner itself. New 1.5 tesla scanners often cost between $1,000,000 USD and $1,500,000 USD. New 3.0 tesla scanners often cost between $2,000,000 and $2,300,000 USD. Construction of MRI suites can cost $500,000 USD) http://sevencounties.org/poc/view_doc.php?type=doc&id=8947&cn=18
There are always some exception so it can detect lie in error(some people could suppress their memory about crime.)
Dr. Michael Anderson's experiment http://www.psmag.com/science/brain-scan-lie-detectors-just-dont-work-59584/
 
4. How will I counter those arguments
According to expert opinion, the cost of brain scanning is keep going down and it is developing rapidly. So, the cost of brain scanning will get equal to the existing lie detecting techniques soon. Also, the existing lie detecting techniques also have exceptions and problems so brain scanning is not only thing that has possibility to detect lie in error. Also, since the technique of brain scanning is keep developing this problem will be solved.  About Dr, Michael Anderson's experiment, he already said that "not everyone was able to suppress their memories of the crime well enough to beat the system." It means that his study is not complete and there are exceptions.

My Refutation and Concession

There must be some people who will disagree about my argument because of the price of fMRI machine and some study examples. However, those reasons are incomplete and have many points that can be contradicted.
First of all, the opponents usually took the priceof fMRI machine as its weak point. According to them, an fMRI machine named New 1.5 Tesla Scanner often costs between $1,000,000  USD and $1,500,000 USD. Another fMRI machine named New 3.0 Tesla Scanner costs between $2,000,000 USD and $2,300,000 USD. It is true that the fMRI machines are expensive because $2,300,000 USD is more than 42times of Americans' average income. However, most of medical devices are expensive and when you consider the effectiveness and good points of fMRI, you can understand why it is not expensive. Compared to other brain scanning techniques, the fMRI machine has the most clear picture of  the brain. Also, it can obseve whole brain part and the change of brain activity.  Moreover, since people's interest in fMRI technique is very high, people try hard to develop the fMRI technique and accordingly, the fMRI technique is keep improving. So, the fMRI machine price will go down.
Another reason that the opponents took is the exceptions. They argue that the fMRI machine sometimes can't distinguish people who are lying. For example, psychologists in the University of Cambridge published new study about brain scanning and during the study(http://www.cam.ac.uk/research/news/people-can-beat-guilt-detection-tests-by-suppressing-incriminating-memories), they could find that some people can intentionally and voluntarily suppress their memories about crime. In their study, there were people who could manage to reduce their brain's cognition response and appear innocent but there were also some people who couldn't. Dr, Michael Anderson,  of the Medical Research Council Cognition and Brain Sciences Unit in Cambridge, said  “Clearly, more research is needed to identify why some people were much more effective than others.” According to him, we can know that this stu is incomplete and still leaves much to be desired because there are many exceptions. So, it is unreasonable for the opponents to took it as their reason to disagree about my argument.

2014년 10월 24일 금요일

Week 8 : Confirmation

Week 8 Objectives - The Confirmation
 
1. What is my thesis?
Brain scanning(fMRI) is an effective way to pick out criminals.

 2. What types of source am I using to defend my thesis? 
I am using expert opinions, result of studies and article.

 3. Are my arguments mostly based on evidence, logic or emotion?
My arguments are mostly based on evidence because I will mostly use expert opinions and study results. There are no argument that is based on emotion but I think it doesn't really affect to my essay.

My Confirmation
   Since the efficiency of fMRI can be proved scientifically and scientific evidences are the most reliable evidences, my arguments are mostly based on scientific studies. I will suggest appropriate study results and expert opinions to support my argument.

   First, fMRI is an effective way to pick out criminals because it can find some people who have high possibility to reoffend according to Kent Kiehl, a neuroscientist at the non-profit Mind Research Netwok in Albuquerque, New Mexico, and his collaborators. they studied 96 male prisoners before they release. They scanned the criminals' brain by fMRI technique while the criminals solve tasks that demand quick decisions and inhibit impulsive reactions.The inmates were instructed to press a button whenever they saw the letter X but not to press a button when they saw the letter K. In this study, Kent Kiehl and his collaboraters focused on the activity of specific brain part named the anterior cingulate cortex(ACC). It is a small section in the front of the brain which perform motor control and excutive funtioning. According to the study result, men who had lower activity of ACC while solving tasks that demand quick dcisions and inihibit impulsive reactions were more likely to reoffend. Inmates with low ACC were twice as likey as inmates with high ACC to be rearrested for a offense withig 4 years of their release. Scientists even considered some factors like age, drug and alcohol abuse and psychopathic traits but the result was same.

  The fMRI technique can predict not only people who have possibility to reoffend but also people who lie. When people lie, specific parts of the brain get active and the blood rush to that part rapidly. By using fMRI technique, we can visualize the blood oxygeneation level and catch rapid changes that happen in 1~2 seconds. So, we can observe whether the criminals are lying or not. In 2001, a English doctor, Sean Spence studied to find brain part that gets active when people lie. He used recent episodic memory to investigate activated brain part and found that brain part is ventrolateral prefrontal cortices(VLPFC), which is in charge of inhibitory control. Spense said this brain part is activated when people lie because people try to suppress saying the truth. After Spense's study, many other studies about lie have been performed. Many studies had same results with Spense's and scientists found that the reaction speed get slower when people lie because lying is a specific task performance that suppress truth and slower and more difficult than saying the truth.

  Lastly, the difference between ordinary people's brains and criminals' brains can be distinguished by using brain scans. Scientists studied 21 people who have antisocial personality disorder, which many convicted criminals have. When scientists compared the brain scans of antisocial people with the brain scans of ordinary people, they could found that antisocial people's brains showed 18 percent reduction in the volume of the brain's mdidle frontal gyrus, and a 9 percent reduction in the volume of the orbital frontal gyrus. Also, according to the September 2009 Archivese of General Psychiatry, another scientific study compared psychopaths and non-psychopaths. The researchers could observe deformations in psychopaths' brain part called the amygdala. Also, the psychopaths showed a thinning of the outer layer of cortex and volume reduction of that brain part. According to researcher team member Adrain Raine, that brain part(Amygdala) is in charge of emotion. Since psychopaths have deformation of that part, they lack emotion such as empathy, remorse, and guilt. Like this, we can observe many helpful clues to pick out criminals.



Week 7 : Narration

Week 7 Objectives - The Narration

My persuasive argument thesis is: Brain scanning(fMRI) is an effective way to pick out criminals.


1. What do people already know about my topic?

People already know that various techniques are used when criminals get police investigation. May be some people who are interested in watching crime dramas like CSI  would have watched police using machines that observe the movement of criminal's eye or change of criminal's heart rate. Also, the lie detecting machines that people put their hands on and electrify when people lie are used commonly in many TV programs or for fun. Even though people are familiar with using fMRI for lie detecting, at least people have some interest in lie detecting methods.
 
2. What research has already been done about my topic?
http://psychcentral.com/lib/types-of-brain-imaging-techniques/0001057- it has information about various types of brain scanning


http://navercast.naver.com/contents.nhn?rid=57&contents_id=2379- it shows what kind of methods are used in interrogation to detect lie.

http://terms.naver.com/entry.nhn?docId=1968069&cid=42406&categoryId=42406- the principle of fMRI
 
3. What are the implications of my argument (What if I'm right? What if I'm right and people ignore me?)
 
If my argument is right, brain scans can be used in various ways that are related to crime. First of all, it can be used as powerful evidence in trial. Actually, now, using brain scans as evidence in trial is not allowed so there is no way to know if the criminal is lying or not. But if brain scans are allowed and accepted, it can be used as powerful evidence about criminal's lie if they state falsely. Also, through some of the studies, we could know that brain scans can be used not only for lie detecting but also finding somepeople who have high possibility to reoffend. When brain scans are allowed to be used in this way, we can find some criminals that have high possibility to reoffend before they really reoffend. So, we can prevent reoffending and occurence of another crime. We can find another way to treat that criminals and it will lead to decrease of crime rate.
 
My Narration
  Like we can see throught crime dramas such as CSI, various techniques are used in interrogation to detect criminal's lie. We have to measure the physical change of criminal which is caused by tension which occur when people lie. Now, there are some people who are well-trained to observe the signs that occur when people lie such as sweating and anxious eye movement. However, there are some limitations in this method so various methods that use machines to detect lie are invented. First, there is a lie detecting technique that measure the change of heart rate.  Usually, when people hide something or get in a trouble, their heart rate goes up. By using the machine, detectives can observe the change of heart rate and get information about whether the criminal is lying or not. Also, there is another method that record the change of blood pressure, breathe and heart rate. Leonarde Keelr made his own lie detector by adding skin conduction reaction through sweat. Keeler also made standardized software for lie detecting, means to ask criminals for effective lie detecing.Thanks to his active marketing, his lie detector spread rapidly. A lawyer, John Reid invented a new way to use lie detector. His innovation was inventing and using controlled question. Controlled question has not much relationship with something that detectives really want to know but brings emotional disturbance. According to the controlled question test, if the reaction of related question is higher than the reaction of unrelated question, the criminal is lying. A psychologist, David Lykken developed guilty knowledge test. By asking questions that are related to crime but that seem only criminals know, and measuring the reaction of criminals, people test whether the criminals' reaction increase rapidly when they answer to the crime related questions.

  Like this, brain scanning is one of the techniques to detect lie. There are various types of brain scanning like EEG, measurement of the electrical activity of the brain by recording from electrodes placed on the scalp, MEG, imaging technique used to measure the magnetic fields produced by electrical activity in the brain via extremely sensitive devices known as SQUIDs and fMRI, a technique for measuring brain activity. Among those brain scanning techniques, fMRI is considered as an effective lie detector.

  When we carry out cognitive force like feeling some kind of fear, love, and astonishment our brain get active and fMRI technique meausre the brain part that is active. Most of fMRI techniques use BOLD(blood oxygenation level dependant) way, which measure the quantity of oxygen in the brain's blood vessels to find which part of our brain is revitalized. Unlike other parts, the synapse of revitalized part of brain get active and the blood rush to that part. The rushed blood brings the difference of blood oxygenation level. The fMRI technique visualize the difference of blood oxidation level. Since specific parts of the brain get active when we lie, we can use fMRI technique to observe whether criminals are lying or not. Unlike other brain scanning techniques, fMRI technique doesn't have to inject radioactive matter into the brain. Also, people can even observe fast and specific reaction changes that  occure in 1~ 2 seconds.
  If the efficiency of brain scanning(fMRI) is proved, it will be able to detect whether the criminal is lying or not. The result of fMRI can be used as powerful evidence about criminal's lie if they state falsely during statement. Also, according to some studies, brain scans can be used not only for lie detecting but also finding some people who have high possibility to reoffend. So, we can find latent reoffenders before they really reoffend and prevent reoffending and occurence of another crime. We can find another way to treat that criminals and it will lead to the decrease of crime rate.
 


 

2014년 10월 21일 화요일

Research 4 : fMRI 거짓말 탐지기의 현재와 미래 The present and future of fMRI, lie detector

http://terms.naver.com/entry.nhn?docId=1968069&cid=42406&categoryId=42406

My topic :
Brain scanning(fMRI) is an effective way to pick out criminals.

What I hope to learn from this source :
I want to learn the good points and bad points about fMRI.

Notes :
1. The principle of fMRI :
fMRI is a technique that measure the quantity of oxygen in the brain's blood vessels to find which part of our brain is revitalized. Unlike other parts, the synapse of revitalized part of brain get active and the blood rush to that part. The rushed blood brings the difference of blood oxygenation level.

2. Critics about fMRI lie detector :
 According to the study of Jesse Rissman, if someone say something with belief even though it is not real (it means that person has a flase memory), the machine was not able to distinguish it. So the standard between lying and false memory is very obscure.
Also, there is a gap between real world and experiment. Experiments happen in controlled environment but real world doesn't.
There are some differences between studies about the brain part of lying.
People trust fMRI very much. So, the use of fMRI as an evidence can be affected by social contexts.

3. The efficiency of fMRI lie detector :
 There is not much difference between fMRI lie detector and existing lie detector. Both fMRI detector and polygraph are machines that are incomplete, read the signs of lying rather than lie itself.
Detecting lying is the most important thing in cross examination system but the jurors are not good at detecting lie. So, the fMRI lie detector can help them.

2014년 10월 20일 월요일

Week 3 : Classical Argument

Eh.... While checking my blog, I could find that I missed to do the classical argument.....
So, I'll do it now.

Classical Argument Outline Example


 
1. The introduction, which warms up the audience, establishes goodwill and rapport with the readers, and announces the general theme or thesis of the argument.

- I will start my introduction by giving examples of SF movies and magicians since they are related to reading human mind. And then, I will introduce about developed methods for reading human mind and people's thought about them.(People are worrying about its effectiveness.) Lastly, I will end with my thesis, "The brain scanning is an effective way to pick out criminals."
 
 
2. The narration, which summarizes relevant background material, provides any information the audience needs to know about the environment and circumstances that produce the argument, and set up the stakes-what’s at risk in this question. In academic writing, this often takes the form of a literature review.
 
-  I have to provide information about what is brain scannig because brain scanning is the most important thing in my essay. Also, I have to provide information about what kind of methods are used in crime related area recently to compare them with brain scanning.
 
 
3. The confirmation,which lays out in a logical order (usually strongest to weakest or most obvious to most subtle) the claims that support the thesis, providing evidence for each claim.

- I will examine the strong points of brain scanning when it is compared to other methods that are used in crime related areas. Then, I will examine how brain scanning can pick out people who have possibility to recommit crime and studies that can prove it. Also, I will examine whether brain scanning can detect lie by investigating related studies.
 
4. The refutation and concession, which looks at opposing viewpoints to the writer’s claims, anticipating objections from the audience, and allowing as much of the opposing viewpoints as possible without weakening the thesis.

- Some will say that using brain scanning program  is too expensive to use for lie detecting. However, the cost of brain scanning techniques are falling down. So, brain scanning techniques for lie detecting are getting competitive.
 
5. The summation, which provides a strong conclusion, amplifying the force of the argument,  and showing the readers that this solution is the best at meeting the circumstances.

- I want to tell the readers what will happen when brain scans achieve recognition. It can be used as powerful evidence in trial and it gets easier to know whether the criminal is lying or not. Also, by picking out inmates who have high possibility to reoffend, we can protect another crime and accordingly the crime rate will decrease.